Haiku

A bed without legs
On top, a tall woman sleeps
Hands reaching the floor.

 

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2 Responses to “Haiku”

  1. Mollie Bryant Says:
    June 28, 2008 at 2:59 pm | Reply

    Sometimes, a person sleeps on a mattress.
    ex-oh

  2. cordelia Says:
    June 28, 2008 at 7:40 pm | Reply

    I am so interested in voice. I love haiku that keeps you guessing about the mood or tone. Was this woman happy, sad, or just exhausted. With my hyperfocus on voice and tone, I’ve created a blog to call for submissions for Haiku of a special nature…check it out and pass it on if you like! Peace
    http://www.hostilehaiku.blogspot.com

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